Comparison Is Not Repetition in TOK Essays Repetition happens when each AOK section says the same kind of thing in isolation. The common mistake is treating comparison as
Comparison Is Not Repetition in TOK Essays
This page turns the video into a StudyIB lesson note you can scan before drafting. Use it to test whether your TOK reasoning is actually specific, comparative, and examiner-facing.
What This Video Covers
Why Real Comparison Matters
Repetition happens when each AOK section says the same kind of thing in isolation. This video gives you a planning method, not a paragraph to copy.
The Student Mistake
The common mistake is treating comparison as a decoration. In TOK, it has to change how the claim is judged, limited, or compared.
What Examiners Look For
Examiners are not looking for a louder opinion. They are looking for controlled judgement: a claim, a condition, a reason, and a limitation.
The Core Question
Ask this first: what does comparison reveal about how knowledge is produced, trusted, interpreted, or limited? If this feels abstract, test it against one real example and ask which detail actually changes the knowledge judgement.
Bad Version
This happens in Natural Sciences. This also happens in Human Sciences.
Why It Is Weak
This version is weak because it sounds true in almost any essay. It does not create a clear knowledge problem for the example to test.
Before You Draft
Do not treat this as a paragraph to copy. Treat it as a planning and diagnostic tool: check whether your claim has a condition, a knowledge mechanism, a limit, and a reason the example matters.
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